I outright don’t like some words *edit: but that’s me having a problem, not the game ! *
Delimiting. I’d rather something more turbo.
Freudspeak. What’s the bearded guy got to do with mechas ? Edge, Authority, By-the-book or whatnot.
I love the “act selfishly” trope ! But I’d call it Pull a stunt, Go it alone, or anything snappy because teen pilots are the coolest kids and it should show in table talk.
Typo "after every successful? operation. ", “the utilize”, “doing poorly in managing”, “to to authority” Over.
I’d like Blade customization to be small lists with difference between play books, like for the character looks.
I’d also like a reference sheet with suggested chassis and parts and drawn schematics. And a list of names I could bolt on anything (gear or factions)
Seriously, I would understand if you told me you’re not considering any of this unless I paid for the additional work !
My apologies for the blunt tone of the post : you managed to pack a lot of deep mobile suit goodness in a few pages.